MetaFic

.....again.

The better news is that I've made us of the time to write and more of Sins has been written. There are a couple of fair sized holes in the narrative but thankfully not in the plot. I realised that some of the chapters I've started on in the past had long sections where there was lots of tell and very little show. As I've discovered when talking to other writers, telling them to show rather than tell is easy (take a bow Kezza), but actually changing the tell to show is a bit harder.

All this cogitation has shown me that I hadn't really sorted out Ginny's character, so I'm working on that next. After that I think that the story will flow quite easily.