Looking for prompts

    My recent attempts to write have only been partially successful, due in part to my ideas requiring more chapters than I'm capable of delivering at the moment. I've looked around at various sites where prompts are regularly posted and found none that appeal to me. So I'm asking for help. Yes, I'm asking for prompts from the good folk of Metafic. Of course, being Metafic, they will not be of the same ilk as found elsewhere and will be capable of twisting my brain into areas never fully explored before. They can be AU, cliche, whatever. The only thing I ask that they can be delivered as a one-shot.

    Any takers?

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    NotACat's picture

    Well, the obvious one…

    …for me, anyway, is the upshot to "Eighth Day". in other words, what happened to Umbridge, Snape, Black and Lupin, not to mention all the others? But I can imagine that being rather more complicated than you're actually asking for right here-and-now, so I'll just keep on hoping…

    If you want something slightly more original, how about a variation on something I've been toying with along with my (far more experienced and frankly out-of-my-league) writing buddy:

    James Potter's sacrifice takes the edge off the Killing Curse aimed at Lily, so that instead of dying she is cast into a magical coma. Some few years later she recovers, but everybody thinks she is insane, what with her blathering about Peter Pettigrew being the betrayer, rather than Sirius Black as any fule kno! She manages to abscond from St Mungo's and tracks down her son…at Number Four Privet Drive. Confrontation ensues…

    In the version we've been discussing, Harry has already been rescued from Durzkaban and is living happily with his "extended family" who are actually instrumental in rescuing Lily from her own durance vile. But I thought you might have some fun with applying this bunny to canon ;-)

    parakletos's picture

    NotACat wrote: …for me,

    NotACat wrote:

    …for me, anyway, is the upshot to "Eighth Day". in other words, what happened to Umbridge, Snape, Black and Lupin, not to mention all the others? But I can imagine that being rather more complicated than you're actually asking for right here-and-now, so I'll just keep on hoping…

    The problem with that is that the engine driving the story was H&G so the others backstory/futurestory was never looked at beyond the needs of the main narrative.

    NotACat wrote:

    If you want something slightly more original, how about a variation on something I've been toying with along with my (far more experienced and frankly out-of-my-league) writing buddy:

    James Potter's sacrifice takes the edge off the Killing Curse aimed at Lily, so that instead of dying she is cast into a magical coma. Some few years later she recovers, but everybody thinks she is insane, what with her blathering about Peter Pettigrew being the betrayer, rather than Sirius Black as any fule kno! She manages to abscond from St Mungo's and tracks down her son…at Number Four Privet Drive. Confrontation ensues…

    In the version we've been discussing, Harry has already been rescued from Durzkaban and is living happily with his "extended family" who are actually instrumental in rescuing Lily from her own durance vile. But I thought you might have some fun with applying this bunny to canon ;-)

    Ok when does Harry get freed datewise?

    NotACat's picture

    Timing is everything

    parakletos wrote:
    NotACat wrote:

    In the version we've been discussing, Harry has already been rescued from Durzkaban and is living happily with his "extended family" who are actually instrumental in rescuing Lily from her own durance vile. But I thought you might have some fun with applying this bunny to canon ;-)

    OK when does Harry get freed datewise?

    In that framework, he is removed from the Dursleys the night of 12th April 1982. For various reasons, we were going to delay Lily's partial recovery by some years to allow the family to settle down. Also there's a couple of significant events in 1983 and 1984 which we wanted to have passed by the time Lily arrives. We were however going to make sure it was before 1997 which is when another significant event happens which would make the off-shoot storyline that much more amusing, and create the leverage for it to go even further AAU (this AU tends to sprout its own AUs like strawberry runners ;-): up to that point the deviation from the original AU doesn't have to be huge. If you like I can point you in the direction of the story in question, and then maybe you'd understand the lunacy of the potential off-shoot :-D

    Having said all of that, what I actually meant for the prompt was to apply the possibility of Lily's survival to canon, and have her perform the rescue. Whether you think she would be capable of pulling that off unaided, I don't know. In our story there is ready-made help (in the form of Remus, Sirius and their spouses): in canon not so much. Heck, might she even try calling upon Snape to help her, for old times' sake? What effect might it have if it takes her months or years to recover sufficiently to take action? How does it balance out giving her longer against leaving Harry in Durzkaban?

    I don't know, but I'd love to find out what you make of it ;-)

    moshpit's picture

    Dumbledore...

    parakletos wrote:

    The only thing I ask that they can be delivered as a one-shot.

    One scene I've always really wanted to read would be Dumbledore's PoV when Harry tells him about the rebirth of LV at the end of Bk4. In particular, the ephemeral look of triumph. It's such a loaded question of just how much AD knew at that point in the story line, and how much he planned to reveal -- under various conditions -- of the truth to Harry. It has the potential for many different philosophies of just who AD really was, bounded only by bits of canon.

    This one would be amusing if handled properly.

    In HBP, Harry received some cauldron cakes laced with a love potion, and Ron was the one to eat them. What if someone else ate them? What if Hermione or Ginny ate them? I can just picture an overenthusiastic girl practically tackling Romilda Vane and snogging her quite thoroughly before she recovers from the shock of what is happening and pushes her away. I can also picture the mortification when the love potion wears off. Not to mention, everyone would know what Romilda had tried to do and how it backfired.

    Or in Sovran's MoO, If Harry ate them, but at the time, Ginny was the one near Romilda, and due to the nature of their bond, she was affected as well.

    Either one would be potentially hilarious.

    Other possibilities

    I've often wondered how things would have progressed at Hogwarts if Hermione had gone to McGonnagal with her suspicions about Harry's detentions with the toad lady. How different would things be -- or not -- had the abusive detentions been discovered immediately? Or if someone with some courage had called Dumbledore on his avoidance of making eye contact with Harry, pointing out how a sullen teenage was likely to do something rash when given the mushroom treatment by adults?

    parakletos's picture

    jediprankster wrote: In

    jediprankster wrote:

    In HBP, Harry received some cauldron cakes laced with a love potion, and Ron was the one to eat them. What if someone else ate them? What if Hermione or Ginny ate them? I can just picture an overenthusiastic girl practically tackling Romilda Vane and snogging her quite thoroughly before she recovers from the shock of what is happening and pushes her away. I can also picture the mortification when the love potion wears off. Not to mention, everyone would know what Romilda had tried to do and how it backfired.

    Or in Sovran's MoO, If Harry ate them, but at the time, Ginny was the one near Romilda, and due to the nature of their bond, she was affected as well.

    Either one would be potentially hilarious.

    TBH this isn't really my style, but thanks for the suggestion.

    parakletos's picture

    moshpit wrote: parakletos

    moshpit wrote:
    parakletos wrote:

    The only thing I ask that they can be delivered as a one-shot.

    One scene I've always really wanted to read would be Dumbledore's PoV when Harry tells him about the rebirth of LV at the end of Bk4. In particular, the ephemeral look of triumph. It's such a loaded question of just how much AD knew at that point in the story line, and how much he planned to reveal -- under various conditions -- of the truth to Harry. It has the potential for many different philosophies of just who AD really was, bounded only by bits of canon.

    This would be a complete break for me, and for that reason alone it has great potential. Mused on it on the way to an otherwise dreary meeting. I'll let you know.

    TBH?

    parakletos wrote:

    TBH this isn't really my style, but thanks for the suggestion.

    What is TBH? And while I'm at it, I've seen IIRC repeatedly in various forums. What does that mean?

    NotACat's picture

    The old abbreviation lark ;-)

    jediprankster wrote:
    parakletos wrote:

    TBH this isn't really my style, but thanks for the suggestion.

    What is TBH? And while I'm at it, I've seen IIRC repeatedly in various forums. What does that mean?

    TBH
    To Be Honest
    IIRC
    If I Recall Correctly

    HTHHope This Helps HANDHave A Nice Day ;-)