Harry Potter: Lily's Child

Harry Potter: Lily's Child by kb0

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What a great premise and a

What a great premise and a great start to this story! I am definitely enjoying it, and I'm looking forward to reading what happens to Lily and Harry next. A lot of this makes a lot of sense if James and Lily had been more prepared and not quite so trusting in their friends.

Great chapter!

Great chapter, siriusly!

Great chapter, siriusly! (ha, ha) I really enjoyed Lilly and Harry coming home at last, and I look forward to Harry getting to go to Hogwarts. While I find his calling Lily "mother", I can understand it as he was brought up in Japanese culture. I just always think of kids not calling their mum "mother" unless annoyed with them or trying to control them, but maybe that's just females. ;P

Great job, I'm really enjoying the story and I hope you update it soon.