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The Last Piece of the Puzzle - Chapter 1: The Last Piece of the Puzzle by Rhetor

Wed, 04/29/2009 - 03:16

    The stones of the wall must have been just as cold against the left side of her face as they were against the right side of his. Her hand was warm, though.

    "I still don't understand," he said. "I talked about protecting the House Elves, and you jumped me."

    She dropped his hand. "Oh, nicely put. Very romantic. You certainly know how to get another kiss."

    "After the woods and the fights and everything else, it was elves?"

    "It was compassion."

    "What?"

    "The last piece of the puzzle."

    "What puzzle?"

    She rolled her eyes, shook her head and kissed him.

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    Thu, 04/30/2009 - 08:34 — NotACat
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    Sometimes…

    …something's obvious because it's correct.

    Avoiding the obvious merely because it's obvious is strange and perverse, yet so many do it because they've been told.

    Nice to see someone simply going for the jugular…in the nicest possible way, obviously ;-)

    Fri, 05/01/2009 - 14:21 — Rhetor
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    Thanks, Phil. Not my usual

    Thanks, Phil. Not my usual line of country, but fun.